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“Everything is interesting if the perspective is right.” Great line.

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I love when you write about writing. This was beautiful.

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Great flow downward, the last five paragraphs were really good.

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"Writing takes time, and sometimes that frustrates me. I want everything to happen right now."

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Hi Ava--looks like there is a small typo. "getting dehydrated druing a hie" I assume should read "getting dehydrated during a hike."

Thanks for what you write! Your work has a fantastic style.

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