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Ruka's avatar

“Everything is interesting if the perspective is right.” Great line.

Hrvoje Šimić's avatar

I love when you write about writing. This was beautiful.

Sage's avatar

Great flow downward, the last five paragraphs were really good.

Seyi's avatar

"Writing takes time, and sometimes that frustrates me. I want everything to happen right now."

Michael Bateman's avatar

Hi Ava--looks like there is a small typo. "getting dehydrated druing a hie" I assume should read "getting dehydrated during a hike."

Thanks for what you write! Your work has a fantastic style.